Hats pulled snug 
down over their curly,
straight, blonde, dark, 
red hair, the writers
scratched and scribbled in 
their notebooks,
filling them with 
graphite and ink,
painstakingly selected–or not– 
most legible, some barely-
mapping out worlds on,
above, and below 
where their feet tread.

Soon, plots emerged 
from five squares, 
mountains, and lines of time
starring angels rescuing 
Greek maidens,
futuristic, dysfunctional
families with 
absentee fathers, and 
laboratory explosions yielding 
zombies ripe for 
devouring human prey. 

woman with red and black face paint
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Urged on, they reluctantly
made two versions 
to grab their readers 
with snappy dialogue, 
startling statements, dynamic 
description and emotion-filled 
action.  Which is better, 
they pondered. Which 
should I use?

Yes, themes are clear, and 
yes, their characters wrestle 
inner turmoil as they discover 
new powers, battle for 
their space in the universe 
or are left behind 
after the victory.

Today, drafting is almost 
finished by these 
planner/pantsers: 
they’re riding
a wave of inspired
revision as their fingers tap, tap, 
tap across the keyboards. 
They’re in the moment– 
in the Zone.

Now, they must Glow-Up 
their creations–upgrade 
the diction, find just the right 
synonym that extends 
an arm around their 
readers and urges them 
along on the adventure, too.

Finally, they’ll wrap their 
new package in the shiny paper
of conventions to prove 
its value to those who
care about such things.  

But for now, they adjust their 
hats and plod on, their
fingers tapping and 
snicking on their 
various devices, 
these passionate, 
precocious young writers.

The deadline looms.



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